Vernacular journey piece and Evaluation

After doing my research i was comfortable to hit the streets with my bike and record my journey to University, But i didn't just want to record my journey but try capture other elements of nature on the way, when i reviewed my video i came across my shadow while riding, i seen it appeared around the area of the old fashioned houses but almost fully disappeared when i was riding past the more modern buildings which i found to be quite spectacular and came up with the ulterior motive of the sun appears and shines on the old and turns away from the advancements of technology and modernism, to further that point, as shown in my piece i have sped up the pars of the video which show modern parts of huddersfield and slowed down/kept the same the out dated, almost country side environment. I believe my research into making this piece has shown through since my first research clip, the guy on his bike with his cat, had a big influence as i have used a few techniques he used in the making of his video such as time lapse and the cut scenes . I have gone off brief a little since the lengh of the piece should only be 30 seconds long and mine is 3 minutes but in order to convey my idea i have had to have it this long since my original video recording was 20 minutes long i have shortened it massively but i believe still demonstrates my understanding of the project. Eventually i will add appropiate sounds to the piece to further support my idea i am trying to bring across.